I really like them! I like the graphicy comic book vibe and the ailenistic quality. The act 1, is good, but does't quite fit with the other two, maybe if it had a bckground or something to tie it to the other three. But I really like it over all. Especially the little boy looking stupified at the sexy lady beemed down from the space ship
I really love your progress! I like your title page and your 2nd act a lot because they work really well as a theme. I think because of this your 1st act seems out of place. However, I don't think that is necessarily a bad thing. I like how you added the kisses to his face to develop this image further. Overall it looks really good and I would just be eager to see a single image in two pages to make an actual spread.
I really like them! I like the graphicy comic book vibe and the ailenistic quality. The act 1, is good, but does't quite fit with the other two, maybe if it had a bckground or something to tie it to the other three. But I really like it over all. Especially the little boy looking stupified at the sexy lady beemed down from the space ship
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ReplyDeleteI really love your progress! I like your title page and your 2nd act a lot because they work really well as a theme. I think because of this your 1st act seems out of place. However, I don't think that is necessarily a bad thing. I like how you added the kisses to his face to develop this image further. Overall it looks really good and I would just be eager to see a single image in two pages to make an actual spread.